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sketch for nightbanebanewolf's commissionby *RadonLights

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EDIT 2: better?
EDIT: I hope you like this one better :3
why i am only just uploading this now, i have no idea.. i've been really lazy this week and my brain was just mush yesterday.. but anyway, here are my 2 favourite sketches for =NightbaneBaneWolf's commission. (usually i do the sketches on paper and transfer the one i like best to my computer)
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Critique by ~xX-NIGHTBANEWOLF-Xx Nov 5, 2012, 8:56:37 AM
It's fine, but the front looks too connected, the should be a chest connecting to the belly, the chest looks too flat out, the hind legs aren't angled right,, but back is too straight, the back right leg could be shorter., there could be more fur around the belly., also, where are the knees and wrists and neck? Anatomy could look more refined, and the muzzle is too square., the tail is too straight, try doing some more layers, fat and poof in areas, and then fix the paws so they will look likes paws and not just pointy stuff stuck onto ovals.

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